tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4482880922456448413.post7845544027016733819..comments2015-11-01T02:05:05.841+13:00Comments on Felicity : My Room!Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10488209309146034637noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4482880922456448413.post-89927789418328322912012-08-23T17:52:19.878+12:002012-08-23T17:52:19.878+12:00My room is big.
Thanks for the comment:)My room is big.<br />Thanks for the comment:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4482880922456448413.post-51399859517170128492012-08-23T08:55:36.672+12:002012-08-23T08:55:36.672+12:00Great Felicity!
You have written a very descriptiv...Great Felicity!<br />You have written a very descriptive and imaginative writing there!<br />I also like how you have inserted a photo of your room, which the readers can compare with, from the room they visualised.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4482880922456448413.post-35275152000791950952012-08-23T08:51:28.534+12:002012-08-23T08:51:28.534+12:00Wow Felicity Your writing is great. You must love ...Wow Felicity Your writing is great. You must love your room very much. How big is you're room?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4482880922456448413.post-14009203230342872802012-08-22T19:58:56.262+12:002012-08-22T19:58:56.262+12:00Cool Floss.
That is awesome writing.
well written....Cool Floss.<br />That is awesome writing.<br />well written.<br />I like the words that you used.<br />Keep up the great work.<br />WELL DONE:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4482880922456448413.post-92021386126239965522012-08-22T18:06:57.698+12:002012-08-22T18:06:57.698+12:00Amazing Floss. I love your writing it so cool. Gre...Amazing Floss. I love your writing it so cool. Great job. I like a picture of your room. Great.:DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4482880922456448413.post-6265827478427434722012-08-22T16:47:07.683+12:002012-08-22T16:47:07.683+12:00Thank you Tash:)Thank you Tash:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4482880922456448413.post-82804826184240230432012-08-22T16:29:15.711+12:002012-08-22T16:29:15.711+12:00Awesome Floss!
I feel like I am in your room right...Awesome Floss!<br />I feel like I am in your room right now. This is a specular piece of writing I wouldn't change anything, its so good. I like the part about the plank and pirate ship.<br />Great job, I mean spectacular job:) Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4482880922456448413.post-20496952663268876102012-08-22T16:18:42.840+12:002012-08-22T16:18:42.840+12:00Awesome Floss!
I can see where you are getting at,...Awesome Floss!<br />I can see where you are getting at, I feel like I am in your room right a the moment I was reading you specular writing. I couldn't describe it any other, its so good. I really like the part about the sharks and the plank, you really have an imagination! Great job, I mean awesome job:)<br /> Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4482880922456448413.post-51429866380529331842012-08-22T15:49:14.571+12:002012-08-22T15:49:14.571+12:00Thank you:) I am enjoyed that you liked it!Thank you:) I am enjoyed that you liked it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4482880922456448413.post-50902757972878640072012-08-22T15:44:28.433+12:002012-08-22T15:44:28.433+12:00Wow Felicity! What an awesome visual picture you ...Wow Felicity! What an awesome visual picture you have created with your right. I love your opening sentence and your use of similes. Well done!Mrs McFadyennoreply@blogger.com