I was amazed, dad was holding his anger so well. Then all of a sudden “meow, meow, meow the cat walks in and jumps on dads head, just in time before he brings his fly swat out.
“Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, get that cat off if my head this instance.” Mum had a thought of getting off of her bum and helping him but she decides to just sit there and laugh.
- Because he had broken his promise
- Because he was being attacked by the pet cat
- Because Mr.Spinks spat out a mouthful of soup all of dad's face.
In the end dad screamed at me and made me go to my bedroom while he spoke to Mr.Spinks about the incident. Mum came into my room and sat down with me and said “ ya know that cat of yours just saved your life.”
“ Yeah I know, but am I in trouble with dad?”
Awesome Floss!
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put in the cat sounds.
You read it out good too.
Well done!
Really funny Felicity! My favourite part is where Mr Spinks spits soup all over dad's face.
ReplyDeleteCool Floss!
ReplyDeleteI love your ending it is really funny and I like how you put the cat meow in. How did you feel when you won?
I was feeling proud of myself, because I was amazed that the people that voted really like it.
DeleteA well written alternate ending, Felicity. You are getting very creative with Windows Movie Maker too.
ReplyDeleteWhat did you think of the real ending?
I think that it was gross and funny at the same time.
DeleteWhat did you think of of the real ending?
My thoughts exactly! I like how Andrew cleverly and weirdly tricked his Dad.
DeleteHi Felicity, this is a great ending to my story. You have a wonderful imagination. I always find that the ending of the story is the hardest bit. You are very good at it - keep writing. Cheers, Paul Jennings.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Paul Jennings.
DeleteThere should be some more licked endings on my class's blogs soon.
When Mr.M told the class what you did I was so amazed and I felt really proud of what I did.
Our class has also read 'Pubic Hare' which was really funny.
Are you in the process of writing another book?
Hi Felicity, Very creative end to the story. I liked the way you read the story as well. I'm not sure if you should be an author or actress.
ReplyDeleteWow! What did it feel like to have a comment from Paul Jennings?
It felt awesome and I felt really proud of my self at the same time.
DeleteIf you go on to my teachers blog you can see the real ending, it is gross and funny.
What a great ending Floss, and very well read. What did you enjoy most, writing the ending or reading it out? - you are a very clear presenter. And to have a comment back from Mr P Jennings. A very proud Mum as well
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed both it was fun acting it and writing it.
DeleteWhat do you think I was best at?
Awesome Flossie,
ReplyDeleteI love your video and also it was a great idea to lick in the start of the video.Your video is really funny as well. Your ending is great and are you should be proud of your self for getting a comment from Paul Jennings. That is AWESOME!!!
Thank you Hannah and yes I do feel very proud of my self for getting that comment.
DeleteCool Floss I like it how you went Meow Meow it made me laugh!
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